to all 3 of you who read my blog:
Post comments, damnit! I want to know when you are spying! at least say hi.
I write because it helps organize thoughts, but I also write because I'm not good at it. Any critique about subject, format, grammar, etc would be welcome as well.
I write because it helps organize thoughts, but I also write because I'm not good at it. Any critique about subject, format, grammar, etc would be welcome as well.
posted by humble bee at 10:19 AM
5 Comments:
"etc" needs a period after it.
:P
Oh, you know I have comments and I like to delete unnecessary commas, but grad-school has weakened my writing abilities.
Your writing is getting better everyday. I think I might have to try this technique.
You make me feel like writing is best left to others... :-)
Come on down to Monterey - the fog is plentiful, the air is cool, and the cherries hang low.
-D
can we hike on the coast?!?!
Yeah... there are some really nice hike-y spots on the coast.
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